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life poeple love and trust by ~janey-jayne:iconjaney-jayne:



Life is so fragile
it can be shattered with a smash.

People are so delicate
we can be broken in a dash.

Love is the strongest feeling
and is hard to go away.

Trust, it is the hardest to gain
but is the quickest to go asrtay.
©2009-2010 ~janey-jayne
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this one is an oldie
sorry im adding this rough
feel free to comment


all fixed kiddos

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:iconorbis88:
Short, sweet and oh so true. A beautiful little poem, with a clear sentiment.

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"Everything has its beauty, but not everyone sees it"
Confucius - Chinese Philosopher

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:iconcantgetafriggnname:
I think this would be your best one posted to date :)

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:damphyr:You used to be my pride and joy
Now you're just my rocket, rocket boy
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Thank you :bow:thank you :hug:thank you :blowkiss:
:iconthis-is-an-emergency:
Love the last two parts.
:iconjaney-jayne:
thank you for the :+fav:
i agree.....(reads back over it) u know what i typed it in wrong :doh: lol
sorry guys ill have to fix it later
:icondreamsinstatic:
I like it a lot, very to the point, and very true.

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thanks for the :+fav: and your opinion is welcome :)

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